What do you think of my Poem!!!?

This is an interesting metaphor poem. I keep thinking of tigers baking in the hot sun and turning into melted er from the book "Little Black Sambo," although I'm not sure if that is what you are alluding to (using a literary reference). I'm not sure if the next image comparing the face to half a letter is referring to an alphabet letter or a written letter to someone. After I read it twice, it sounded like maybe you were comparing it to a letter of correspondence written on old parchment. I think you need to fix the punctuation a little where it says "Let me immerse myself in others' pions" (apostrophe if you are referring to the pions belonging to others) and also change "Your's" to "Yours" without an apostrophe. I like your internal rhymes and your alliteration with "running rampant." It's a nice little poem.